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He held me in his arms as I held my sorrows in
He spoke kind words to me to free me from my sin.
I refused to show my pain, I couldn’t hide it anymore
He told me he was there for me and from my heart it tore.

My eyes started to water as he spoke these words to me
He wiped a tear away, as he let my soul break free.
A few more tears rolled down my cheek, I knew I had to fight
He told me it was ok to cry as he held onto me tight.

I tried to break away from him as my tears began to flow
But he only held on tighter and said he would never let me go.
He held me through the night as I cried out all my rage
I would cherish that night forever, the night he turned the page.
:iconyour1nonlystringbean:

Author's Comments

So. I've had a really bad writers block for EVER and I finally wrote something good! The only thing more I want to do with this, I'm not talented enough to do which is draw a picture and put this on the side. The only person i know who could do this *cough specs i'll pay you cough*so I hope you enjoy it!

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:iconskellington13rose:
This is really good. :D

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."
I adopted a Jigen Daiuske chibi from The-Den

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek...

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!
:iconmidstarynight:
Wow, I like it a lot! That would make an interesting picture. :aww: :clap:

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Let's rent a truck. And truck-a-duck.
:iconlijra:
Omg, *first comment dance*
I love this...It's...deep!
Good job!!
Gotta Fav it!
:iconyour1nonlystringbean:
thank you!

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"All men are the same. God just put different faces on them so we could tell them appart."

- something some old lady said that my mom repeated back to me..
:iconskellington13rose:
Anytime ^^

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I :heart:....
:damphyr:Zaclonius: "Hakuna Matata."
I adopted a Jigen Daiuske chibi from The-Den

:iconmansionfans: < When the crypt doors creek...

:iconbishies-r-us: < Awesome!
:iconyour1nonlystringbean:
thankies!

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"All men are the same. God just put different faces on them so we could tell them appart."

- something some old lady said that my mom repeated back to me..
:iconyour1nonlystringbean:
i thought so too. my friend spectrolite does alot of amazing work and has done a few pieces like that. so i be like...hey..*nudge*

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"All men are the same. God just put different faces on them so we could tell them appart."

- something some old lady said that my mom repeated back to me..
:iconmidstarynight:
:giggle: Well, if Spectrolite decides to draw it, can you send it my way? I'd love to see it. :aww:

Also, I love your user name. :nod: Awesome. :aww:

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Let's rent a truck. And truck-a-duck.
:iconyour1nonlystringbean:
i'll be sure to post it. and thanks!

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"All men are the same. God just put different faces on them so we could tell them appart."

- something some old lady said that my mom repeated back to me..

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